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Maps advice

created Sep 18th 2022, 10:11 by LuffyNguyen


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Here is some advice:  
1 Introduction  -  Just paraphrase the question  (instead of  two possible sites you could write two potential locations).  
2 Summary - The main point is that the first site (S1) is outside the town, whereas the second site is in the town centre. Also, you could  mention  that  the  map  shows  the  position of both  sites relative to a railway and three roads which lead to three smaller towns.  
3 Details (2 paragraphs)  -  Don't write a separate paragraph about each  site; comparing the sites is much better.  I'd  write  one paragraph  comparing  the  position  of  each  site  relative  to Garlsdon (mention the different areas of the town), and another paragraph about the positions relative to transport links with the other three towns.  
 

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